So I actually worked on the novel yesterday, despite a pile of homework that needed to be done for class.
Got 1463 words done. A little shy of the 1667 that I should have finished with.
I created a lot of quotes. It is something I like in the stories that I read. There are quotes in Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, Agent of Chaos, Myth-Adventures, and a few other of my favorite books.
I find that quotes can give another viewpoint to the reader without having to switch viewpoints, or do flashbacks. In my case, I am using them as hints and hooks.
When I did my attempt in July, I resisted putting these types of quotes in. Mistake on my part. I was trying to write what I have been told is a good novel, rather than the type of novel that I would actually read left to my own devices. Live and learn.
Well, I am off to work on the novel; see you all tomorrow with my results.